She sit all by her emoself with mascara tears rolling down her face. She can't put up with this anymore; life, rejection the feeling of being hated,talked, about used. She rummages through her closet looking for a rope or a belt anything. She finally finds an old tattered rope the answers to all her problems she thinks. She grabs a stool with a smile on her face she heads straight to the closest she ties the rope in a fatal, yet perfect knot and steps on to the stool, she ties the rope around the shelve hanger and ties it in a fatal, yet perfect knot. She takes a deep breath and takes a step off...
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- Give Me the Best of You(show me your soul) by Craven Rosewood.
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welcome to allpoetry
Such a sad heart-breaking piece... even more because it is reality for too many. This was vivid and real.
Please continue to write and share.
~Kristy -
.....shiver, I almost have a problem with this one. I said dark or scary, but not disturbing
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wOw!!I lYk HoW u SaY "She takes a deep breath and takes a step off..."iT lEaVeS dA rEaDeR wOnDeRiN wAt HaPPeNs NeXt!!N i KiNdA hAv An IdEa WaT hAppENeD!!
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