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You see me

I cant get this feeling to go away
This deep secret that know one knows but you
everything that you said
is still ringing in my head
my chest feels like there is no end to this aching
it is painful but oh so sweet
with all these steps that we are taking
keeps running through my mind
I know you are there for me
I stopped looking cause theres nothing else for me to find
you are here that is all I will ever see
I know that for eternity you wouldn't leave me
because you truly see me for me

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  • When Darkness Falls
    May 12, 2008
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    wow

    this poem is really great,
    ahahaha this is how 1 of my
    friends is with me and the way im
    with her she''s possible the only person
    that can break my heart but i trust her not to

    Ps
    This deep secret that no one knows but you

    im not sure if u intended it to be like that
    but i thought id let u know