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Pure

What you may see
May be
What you give of yourself
I will take
Be it pure and true
I will see
Be it not,I forsake

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  • queen Greeters member
    May 24

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    Welcome To All Poetry

    You say a lot with few words, excellent poem

    Please keep writing, reading and commenting

    Barbara
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  • Touchof1der Moderators member
    May 13

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    I can really related to this and I like the flow of it. It is strong and concise in it's wording, yet has simple, effective terms that anyone can grasp, which is wonderful. A great piece here. Thank you for sharing this with me and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use dear poet.
    ♥ Touchof1der