The cast of golden light touches the sky,
I hold you tight in the grasp of my arms,
floating in a dance I could almost fly.
Love twines our bodies with a magic charm
with movement of burning love to new heights,
it is just the two of us; free from harm.
Our hearts dance through dawn's early light
guiding our souls along the summer wind.
Never letting go of this sheer delight!
Shall we continue our dance?
Author notes
10 lines - 10 syllables Rhyming scheme ABA BCB CDC Short line not rhyming.
Prompt choice: 1. Dances at dawn without weeping
A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
525 points, ended May 14, 10 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Great Rythm and Flow!
"floating in a dance I could almost fly."
This line is SO powerful, it flies right through me
This whole poem is beautiful 
Best of luck
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