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Crawling

Missing image

Emotions rolling inside..
The words that you say ,
I can feel crawling within my
Withering soul..
Memories of what we used to be haunt
my every waking moment...

Walking away I call out your name,
But you leave with one finale blow and I
Stand here, alone.. Feeling my emotions crawling..

Causing,
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Author notes

12 poets/30-60 words no less then 30 words no more then 60 words, please
Words:53

named Pain by Asunder
collected from deviantart.com

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  • buffsab99 silver member
    May 13

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    Sad

    You write so well, this has winner written all over it dear sweet sister


  • LadyDementia gold member
    May 13

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    Wow, this is an awesome write you've penned! Love the way you've laid it out. Superbly done hunni, good luck


    • Angelflower Greeters member
      May 13
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      Thank you very much.. I'm glad that you liked it!! It's great to here that from the "queen" of "dark" lol.. thanks for reading it..


  • CinfullyDelicious gold member
    May 13

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    oh gosh eerie deep words...

    It was just too easy to feel them..I love how you structered the ending...

    You dug deep with this pic prompt thank you and good luck


    Cindy


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    May 13

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    So sad

    Wow sweetie you are so good with portraying emotions of the heart. this is heart wrenching and touching. I wish you well in the contest but I think you have a winner LOve you sweetie, Daddy0

  • Nighttime angel
    May 12
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    good luck sissy


    love you

    kat
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