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Tear

Return or forego?
The eyes, heart, and mind show no synchronicity.
Do tears fuel or douse the flame of loss?
With words I build or destroy.
To run into the midnight mist, or beg the sun not to set?
The path ahead is unknown, and here the ice is thin.
Is the dove to be let go, or crushed by my own hands?
I release it from my heart, to dissolve into the wind.

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  • excellent take on the thought prompt

    short poem but very well written
  • Welcome To Allpoetry

    Hi Farfromahero12,
    This is an excellent write Good luck with it in the contest. Glad to see you participating here at allpoetry. Hope you enjoy your stay here.
    Greeter Cara