running in the dark
the sun has gone down
the blade glistening in the moon
the blood on the girls gown
the screams in the night
help nowhere to be found
the sun has gone up
the girl is on the ground
next night it starts over
a new victim is picked
she screams bloody murder
the killer is an addict
he smiles with pleasure
another pretty girl dead
he goes home smiling
and drifts off to sleep in his bed
the night brings fun games
for the killer to play
i'll let you in on a secret
tomorrow is your day...
Author notes
i picked option 1. dark/fear.
my name is S A R A H 4 5.
A contest entry
- Give Me the Best of You(show me your soul) by Deadmans Heart.
2000 points, ended May 18, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
The dark brings its fears...
Comments
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SCARY lol
i really liked this one! good job
christina
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this poem is really cool i like how you take the dark/fear promt and write a wonderful rhyming poem about it, keep up the great writing, goood luck in the contest, this poem is truely deep and dark - ♥ your sis Amy
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