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dont stop

i sit in this dark room
thinking of all the joy you have brought me
and all the comfort you have given me
i can see things are going good
and i couldn't ask for anything more
ut the only thing i ask is
Dont stop loving me
dont stop the things you do
thats what makes you you
i cant change that
and i dont want you to change
just dont stop loving me
so fights yet
there is a holy sign there
i know we are meant to be
i want to foreshadow a child with you
being a father is my biggest dream
and in my dream, i want you to exist with me
so i ask you, will you be mine forever
dont stop loving me in the end of time

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Luke, i love you forever

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  • teen parent
    May 12

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    Baby this is by far my favorite poem ever! Yes, we will have a child together. I promise

    Love,
    Luke