Ever constant stalker
augmented by illumination
your transparency is cast,
darkness within the light.
Luminance aiding in your onslaught
That which once shined openly
now lay faintly obscured,
cloaked beneath your dusky shroud.
In a list
A contest entry
- A Wordplay Poetry Contest by -BlackKnight-.
600 points, ended June 9, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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"Shadows".
No need for the fancy logo; a simple title works well enough.
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But it was pretty...
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I know, but I'm picky.
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So I've noticed. Gah. It was a nice touch.
At least they did something original ya know.
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Shadows.
Interesting write. I like the imagery you paint with this one. It was short and a pleasure to read.
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This was really great! I'm speechless actually..
I know I would never be able to do this and you pulled it off flawlessly! this was just so amazing and really well written.. I really liked the image that you created here as well.. Best of luck hun.. *hugs*
Angel
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Thank you very much, I had fun with this one ~Bret~
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