Oh God
I grasp,you conceived me
this way, I am all-powerful
this evoke the dilemmas
destining in blunders by me
ransacking the exquisite forepart of life
I am now researching to fix it
however, unsuccessful
I may be a hero
yet I can't compete with you
since I am a wildlife
and you are, the civilized one
Oh God....
Author notes
• "Nothing will work unless you do."
A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
2100 points, ended June 22, 15 entries
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This is a nice piece here everyone has heros in their life and often the ones that are in hte shadows and are not known hold the biggest influence thanks for sharing
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great realization...and it gets deep to our daily thoughts if we stop by a bit to look inwards....
I may be a hero
yet I can't compete with you
very good work. congrats and best regards!
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'I may be a hero
yet I can't compete with you
since I am a wildlife
and you are, the civilized one'
those are excellent lines
three clappies for you
. Rewarded 4
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oops, forgot applause
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This is quite beautifully written, and I particularly love the last 5 lines. No world hero can ever compete with God.
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