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Swimming

Swimming is the thing I love to do
It's who I am, who I want to be
I love the cold water as it rushes past my face
And the rhythm of the water as I keep my pace

 

I love diving, one minute flying
The next sinking, away from the world
I feel like myself more then ever
When I'm swimming
Someday with the fishes below

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  • longlife
    June 26, 2008

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    pretty! I like the rhymes in spots i wish you would have rhymed the whole poem not just parts but i think it turned out to be a pretty poem


  • ixtli
    May 13, 2008

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    There is a lot of great imagery here. I enjoyed reading this. Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering!