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Time ticks for no man
as Einstein said time is relative
so says he
time for me goes by fast
you gotta make the best out of each moment.

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  • PoetryDove
    July 11, 2008

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    Memories are important and even though you can't re-live them, it's great to remember.
    "Time ticks for no man
    as Einstein said time is relative"
    - great start!

    It's true...
    You need to make the best out of each moment, or else there's nothing worth living for.

    Nice write.
    Sincerely,
    dovey ~


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    And if the clock is moving
    it ticks faster than one
    that is stationery...
    Great concluding line.