Your stupid lies
Don't they strangle you
You can't explain yourself at all.
And all your wants
And all your needs
I don't want nothing of you
Anymore baby
Your lies start breathing
I start choking
Maybe it's best you leave me alone.
My love has withered
On this evening
You gave the final blow
I look at you with such disdain
It ends tonight with your last fucking lie
I know, I know
I've figured everything out
I've discovered your lies
It's too late to fight
When darkness turns to light
I want you out of my sight baby
No more lies already baby
'Cause all I ever wanted was
Just love
Author notes
i hope you like it
A contest entry
- No Lies, Just Love... by Fallen Grace.
900 points, ended June 8, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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oohh strong words and the anger instense
it's nice to let loose sometimes esp when we're so pissed off
to hell, even if we use profanity
sometimes it's necessary
cause it's never be easy being angry most especiall to the one really love
though someimes it's worth the shot cause it our worth
that's worth it...
you are really good
Anna Lee
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Great job with this piece, has a really nice flow and it fits my mood right now =P So, good luck in the contest.
-Les -
Absolutly beautiful! I really like your style and imagery in this poem, it's wonderful. Well done on this write!
Thank you and Good luck in my contest!
- ♥
Beautifully-Bound
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