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the soul

inside this box where my mind is kept,
i cannot see any way out.

on the cellar floor,
the chains weigh me down.

i am a soul,
trapped inside a body,
which is not mine.

faces scream at me,
bodyless, and faint.

i search around,
to find a window out.

i am a soul,
trapped inside a body,
which is not mine.

i drag myself up,
to a sitting position.

i am weak,
but strong enough to fight.

i am a soul,
trapped inside a body,
which is not mine.

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  • Darkest Lover
    May 12, 2008

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    Really Good

    I Really Like This Write Alot
    So Many Emotions Kept Inside
    I Like The Whole poem
    It all comes Together

    Thanks For Entering
    and Good Luck