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Ripping

Like worms into a heart
You cannot seperate
You cannot sever

Lies like fingers through gray matter
Do not remove!
The brain will die...

Cancer in your lungs
There's no way to get it out
And leave the breath in...

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  • Sorrow is the name
    May 12, 2008

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    Really Good

    I Like This Write Alot
    Its Short But So Good
    In So Many Ways

    Thanks For Entering
    And Best Of luck