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Perfection

You are the
Perfect distraction
To the chaos
In my
Life.
You are the
Perfect getaway,
The perfect
Shelter,
And the
Perfect moment
I so long
to be in.
You are so simply
Amazing
That you are the
Only
Person I can compare
Something as
Complex
as Perfection to.

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  • KenKen Emmerick
    May 16, 2008
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    oops, forgot one


  • KenKen Emmerick
    May 16, 2008
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    A bold poem to say the least. You dont use a whole bunch of fancy vocabulary, but rather you just let the emotions out in the simplest ways. Thats a good thing because it shows that you have a unique writing style and you arent trying to sound like somebody. Good write, I enjoyed it very much. ^