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One Goal

On a different planet,
I explore, find, and understand.
But what I soon discovered,
was that things did not go as planned.
I gaze at the horizon,
and see nothing but the horizon.
I look to the mountains,
and see nothing but the mountains.
Now, I feel cold and isolated,
yet a flame starts to grow inside.
The fire in me gets larger,
and then I start to cry.

I am alone on a different planet,
My friends and family gone.
There is only one thing I will strive
to do and that is stay alive.

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  • SlashBabe
    May 13
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    wo its really really good. u def put me into the idea that the place you are is foreign to you. nic