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Pools Beneath Your Feet

Here I am again ~breathing
without gills~ wondering
if you can still hear
me.

~gup-gup-gup~

I’m wading aimlessly with
my fins, as you cup me
with your hands.

to                                        watch                              me

(so pretty)

And I’m watching you too, not
A blink in sight. ~A fish
in these restless pools of
rain~

As your eyeballs strain…

I’m falling…To where? Down the
drain…
I think…

                          And it feels like nothing, but…
                    What nothing is nothing with nothing there?
                                    (question mark)

So just stare at me…(I’m fluffy)

As it
S
        T
                O
                        P
                                S
That drop, which connects me to you.

But wait, there you’ve gone and stepped
On me.  Yeah me. This pool
Beneath your feet.
(pooh)

~It seems your shoes have lain to waste the beauty that is me…oh the tragedy~

As you stand here in this pool, to take a look at me.

Author notes

Nonsense I say!

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  • Xraided
    June 16, 2009
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    I don't understand this poem at all. It makes..no sense....nonsense!


  • Onionducks
    May 13, 2008

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    hm...

    Oh my.. that's a rather dark one Uthrem... you're going to have animal cruelty on top of you after that one!
    ALthough i found it rather disturbing, it's a great write... tis good to see you're still about!


  • Mrs. Mautino
    May 12, 2008

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    You're a fluffy fish? Smexi but I'm sorry you were crushed Can someone bring a fish back from the dead?