an ambrosia of cigarettes and stale liquor
a fried debauch covered in a sultry sauce of blazin' heat
sexily swooning and swaying to the sound of
"hey jude" belted vicariously by a group of
ragtag misfits through the evils of karaoke
lost in each other's eyes
her crimson-tinged tresses thread through my fingers
our faces lit up like children's jack-o-lanterns
grinning jocosely towards one another
immersed in ecstatic bliss
A contest entry
- Pain You Can't Explain And More by BlackBloodyRose.
499 points, ended May 22, 2008, 46 entries
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Comments
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nice job
i like it
especially because of hey jude
thats one of the best songs ever
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Truly a strong immagery and very well crafted poetry bringing the depth into the claims made in poetry..well done....
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um...
once again i must commnt i am confused. wut is this about...wut option...
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