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Letting heart lead

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In gentle sways of her tresses
small aqua life plays,
she saunters on
caressed by waves
to reach her love.

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  • GreySquirrel gold member
    May 17
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    Gypsie Ink has so eloquently described the grace of your poem. Congratulations!


  • Gypsie Ink silver member
    May 16

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    Gentle

    and very peaceful...A delicate write and wonderful read!

    I thank you for taking the time of raising your pen to my page, and wish you the very best.

  • marlene47 silver member
    May 16

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    I like this - the sway and saunter of a woman juxtaposed with the aquatic life. The caresses and anticipation nice too.
    Marlene

    • crimsondew silver member
      May 16
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      Thank you very much..glad you enjoyed it!I really do not do much of fantasy writes...this will be among my firsts...
      take care

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 12

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    Aww that is so pretty!! So fitting for the picture... I hope she reaches her love!

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