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[ Euphoric glow, ]

Euphoric glow,
Luminescent, yet discrete.

His love for her shows no bound,

For her, he'd weep.

 

Cannabinoids and tropane alkaloids.

Vission blurry from all the dxm and codeine.

Simple drugs these days,

Nothing less, nothing more.

 

He loves this feeling,

Utter bliss it seems.

Sorrow erodes, as happyness floods.

This might just work.

 

Finally saved,

This young lad at last,

His angel has come,

What's this?

 

Love. 

 

Author notes

I kinda...don't like this one..
Didn't quite turn out as I hoped x.X"

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  • xrated-candy
    May 30, 2008
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    dxm...[i hate that]
    but true with the simple drugs these days fuck its crazy good poem once again


  • endless-lover silver member
    May 12, 2008

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    well sucks for you if you dont like it babe
    i myself love it. though your vocab is so much greater then mine lol. i liked it good poem babe!


    • AddiKt
      May 12, 2008
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      Haha, I like yer poems wayyyy over mine xD
      Fancy words don't replace true talent.


      • endless-lover silver member
        May 12, 2008
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        hmm..
        idk bout that!
        but anywhoz erg..my moms pissing me off!
        so is the computer lol.

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