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Haiku

Sora ga kurai

Kumo ga kurushii

Oame gou

Darkened skies

Threatening clouds

Heavy rains 

 Copyright © 2008 Victor Duna. All rights reserved.

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  • DogFish silver member
    July 5, 2008
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    terse, heavy...l like it!


  • Flowergirl
    June 24, 2008

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    wow that was awesome yet again you left me speechless..... i have no idea what to say but this was great i loved it and cant believe it left me with nothing to say when it was such a great write....well keep it up and dont stop writing such great poems