Blessed thoughts transparent
Needed foster parent
Tears of patents
Loneliness is absent
The breeze of hope
The stench of dope
Stains on the bed
As she plays dead
Counting the bruises
Reciting excuses
Misunderstood angel
Beaten by a cudgel
The wings are wide
Guard her backside
Wipe her wet tears
Dreams are her fear
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt(semi-quickie) by Angelflower.
772 points, ended May 15, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This was just a hauting write..
It really touches the heart and brings a
Tear to the eyes.. I really liked your take on the prompt, though you did go over 40 words.. I would DQ you but this was really strong and heartfelt..
Best of luck..
Angel
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aww thank you ...its so true
i had to write about it -
Great job! Unfortunately there are too many children in the same situation. Good luck in this contest!
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thank you very much
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awwwww hugs... great write although sad....... thanks for sharing your heart.... hugs and good luck in contest....
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