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Droplets

Missing image

Love is

a droplet

the lips never drip,

when spoken in salient sorrow

over parent's heart,

which stopped beating.

 

They soak

into grief's crevices,

able to cleanse the stains

with hope's detergent

knowing in heaven

one will feel

hugs again.

Author notes

40 words

Please credit: http://wendelin.deviantart.com/art/Tears-Will-Wash-It-Away-13329206

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  • Angelflower Greeters member
    May 15

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    oh.. this just brought
    tears to my eyes!! I really loved this!!
    You did a wonderful job with the prompt!!
    Best of luck!!

    Angel

  • Lil-Bit Crazy silver member
    May 13

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    i sure hope so... hugs your arent afraid of..? heaven....? wow makes me smile... thanks for sharig this great job.. and good luck in contest...

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 13

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    Aww gosh... how heartbreaking!! Beautifully written as always and so fitting for the picture!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    May 12

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    Beautiful take on the picture--So sad!
    Well done & Best of luck in the contest!!


  • Midnight-x-Rose gold member
    May 12

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    Awww so beautifully written and so very true. So much happier than mine is though, mine totally miserable! Beautiful write grandpa Good luck.

  • sunshinegirl
    May 12

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    Holy Smokes!!! What a read this one is!! This touched my heart deeply this evening!! Every word is amazing!

    Best of luck in this contest!!

    and love my friend

    Nyetta

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