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One more time..

For those who have loved and lost
because of a final, and deadly mistake
do not mourn
for i too, know of this foolishness of human nature
the way a person can hurt the one they
love to the point of of return
where they are distrustful of you
forever and more
also comes the pain that makes you feel like you are rotting
inside
but, we must go on!
even though fate had dealt wrong.
To try to correct the mistakes of our past
to show our true loves we are new creatures of the world
who have realized that deadly mistake
that cost them everything in their life
to show our loves that we are willing to take the chance
of loving, and giving
one and final time!

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  • JakOb-Black
    May 22, 2008

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    i like it... if we truely loved the person we should not mourn there death... but rejoyce that they lived to make a difference in our life...