When she no
longer could
F i g h t
Them anymore
The tears
H e l d
In for so long
F
E
L
L
And when the
Last tear came
She started wilting
A w a y
Then He
C a m e
And E
A
S
E
D
Some of the
P a i n
For Her
Author notes
I want you to write something that comes from your soul..
THE USUAL RULES APPLY
NO MORE THEN 40 WORDS
THE PICTURE IS YOUR PROMPT..
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt(semi-quickie) by Angelflower.
772 points, ended May 15, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Listen To The Words Of My Heart...
Comments
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aww this is really good! I love your take on the prompt!! it was sad in the begining like this no way to heal but in the end there was hope!!! I loved it!!
Great write!! best of luck..
Angel
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Beautiful. Makes you think. It can fit so many situations.
Good luck!
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Oh my tears well up on this one
I say to the people out there that can harm such angels the world is becoming so aware and we will find those so wicked and put a stop to this abuse.
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Very powerful. There is no shame in crying. God created tears to help us heal. Some people can handle that and others not. This is a very deep feeling poem. Keep writing the feelings.
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Aww... how lovely to have someone come and ease the pain...
Lovely hun
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This is one of your best. I like the way you compose your thoughts.
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Oh Hon, This is amazing!! What a wonderful take on the prompt!! Your words are wonderful!!
Best of luck in this contest!!
and love
Nyetta
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u r amazing i love your works.. you hav a unique talent. thanks...
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Oh....very nice there twin. I was thinking along the same lines, but my soul doesn't seem to work at the moment.
I wish you luck!
~Kystal Angel
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