I would leave if the world could protect me.
But I'm a loser and I can't be
anything.special
I would get all up in your face
but I don't know my place
anymore.
I'll close my eyes
when angels cry.
When I know that they feel this too.
When I finally realize that this is only partially normal.
Lay me to die
in the emptiness and gloom.
Under the darkening skies and beautiful stars.
When I forget to breathe,
you know it's time to run.
Author notes
whatever. I needed to write but nothing was really coming out. so I took advantage of the topic of this contest. It's what came out when I was [[thinking]]. =]]
A contest entry
- Drop what your doing and write what you are thinking by HereComesTheSun.
450 points, ended May 25, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I liked this, there are some really nice parts in here - it is wellpresented as well.
Thoroughly enjoyable.
James
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this is really awesome.. i really like the examples you use.
=]
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well you did a fablous job i loved it
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