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Point of no Return....

Love is the greatest feeling in all the world.
To finally fall in love
for the first time in ones life
is the greatest joy one can have.
'Till by accident ones causes
that feeling of joy and ecstacy
to be erased from your life forever.
Then the pain of heartache comes.
The searing heart-wrenching pain.
That feels as if it is burning your soul,
and that there is no return to your life.
Only the horrible pain and disaster.
As if you are condemned to Hell for all eternity.
But you and I must go on.
The pain will ease with time
'till once again you are in love
and you make that terrible mistake another
time and lose all hope for
love the rest of your life.

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  • JakOb-Black
    May 15, 2008
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    I like it...

    it is so true... but true love is hard to find...


  • ThexInfamous
    May 12, 2008

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    Fantastic!

    The title reminds me of Phantom of the Opera, lolll. I love it though! Such intensity and emotion, clearly written by the heart.