why this way
why that way
why did it have to be you
we've done this before
can we do it agian
could there be another chance
there has to be
there you are asking me agian
will you be my girl
you are sweet
you are cute
you make me feel so special
no lies
no hurt
no pain
you've hurt people
and broken hearts
i've hurt poeple
and broken hearts
are we really ment for each other
could it be so do have a chance in the world
may be maybe not
but lets give it a go
i'll be yours
you'll be mine
A contest entry
- I am in love ~ with Vignettes by AutumnGypsy.
1400 points, ended May 2, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
have you ever felt like love has just smaked you in the face is it ever fair?
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This is a good piece a spelling error or two in it which could be fixed, not really set out like a vignette but I enjoyed it. Best to you in the contest
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Oh yes- love has actually done so to me. No I feel that it is not fair whatsoever!
This is such a great write, imagery is fantastic and the flowness of the poem is great!
Keep it up
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A lot of Love!
Great emotions here! Lovely poem! I like
I"ll be yours
you'll be mine!" This poem has wonderful imagery and flow
and it read so well! The subject of love is so perennial in poetry, but this one shows another new twist! Good work!
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wow that was really good is this about corey? well that was a great write
Love ya
Nicole Rodgers
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what the heck
hell no that is not about corey what the hell are you thinking
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