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Four-Letter Word

 

Troubled, in my thoughts and dreams
In what I deemed to be everlasting
with your embrace
I tear it in pieces
At the sight of you
What you make me do is crumble
Cherish you, I once did
Now, to glance at you
I must humble
myself

Throwing out your four-letter word
like it had some value
But only now
Now that by heart bleeds and my soul gasps,
trying to catch its breath
That it's only use was for dimmer lights
and nights I soon won't forget

For only in pages that I've wrote in
can I see how blinded
I must have been
Adding me to your life, not making me your life
Am I nothing but an accessory?

I am not another trophy you have won
And such, you treat me as if this is my purpose
To look good and laugh a bit
Trample on my heart and leave it in bits
Is that it?

Hell hath no fury like the wrath of a woman scorned
And your four-letter word means nothing to me

I will have nothing to do with you

 

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See if you can figure out what the "four-letter word" is.

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  • movedon
    July 26, 2008

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    *re-reads a few times* ok I give up, TELL ME!

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • NickelleteXninja
    June 13, 2008

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    This Sounds Like My writting

    Really struck a nerve witht his one....

    Exactly or almost exactly the way i have been feeling....


    Thnaks for the entry


  • DawnKestrel
    May 19, 2008

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    Wow. I can't figure it out though...
    Good luck in my contest!


  • LadyUnique silver member
    May 12, 2008

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    sometimes we just gotta get it out when two sets of feelings don't match in a relationship one is bound to get hurt. pain brings on anger just like you've written.

  • ballisticmonkey3
    May 12, 2008

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    An honest realease

    For me, it is needlessly lengthy, and much to cliche with the "heart bleeding" and the "soul gasping" bit.
    Surely there are other words that can be welded into sentences that are more emotionally descriptive than the tired standbyes above? (Although, we all must use them on occasion...after all, there are only so many descriptors to go around.)
    However...it is most certainly an honest write that seems to free the writer, and is a very open release of very intense feelings and for that, is deserves to be richly commended.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    May 12, 2008

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    love makes the world go round! your words pull out all the emotions and so many can relate to these feeling.  life is indeed a rollercoaster ride... excellent write so much passion. God bless...


  • Mistress Masquerade
    May 12, 2008

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    LOVE? is it love? i really love that you said hell hath no fury like a woman scorned, so perfect. i just love that line. the emotion in this is FANTASTIC.


  • warrior-eagle
    May 12, 2008

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    What four letter word could this be?
    Now you are getting me to think.
    Anyways, this was..you are just
    really an amazing writer,
    your works are pure greatness.

    ...Simply Me♥

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