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Guardian Angel

Please do not weep
For I am finally free
I am sitting here in heaven
Where I am supposed to be
I have lived my life
And mistakes Ive made a few
But now I am in heaven
Life Anew
I haven’t gone far
This I promise you
I am still here
Sent to watch over you
I am your guardian angel
And Ill be by your side
Please talk to me
Don’t keep it all inside
I am still hear
Close enough to hear
If you need me I will be waiting
In moments of grief and cheer
I know times will be trying
And heartbreak will come your way
But Ill be watching over you each and every day

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This I wrote for my dad who just passed away on May 1st

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  • Snowflake
    June 4, 2008

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    Beautiful

    Sorry to hear about your loss, but your poem is true. I really dont think they are gone forever that somewhere they are still keeping in touch by watching over us when we need them to. The poem was beautifully written.

    IVY


  • SerenityNChains gold member
    May 14, 2008
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    My arms about you my dear sister! I have missed you so much, and remember so much the ache and sorrow when your dear mom left this world, now the ache returns. I am here if you need an ear to vent on, and a shoulder to soak in tears. Hugs and kisses all over your tear streaked face.

    Blessings be,
    Billie Jean


    • twinzy001
      May 28, 2008
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      Billie you sweet wench. I too have missed you. Yes I am aching but learning to cope with it. I do have great friends and family that are by my side in the trying times that I have been dealing with. Things will lighten up soon or bust!

      Savina


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 13, 2008
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    -Sad-

    I always seem to feel so bad for those left without their loved ones, for the family members I have lost, somehow, I feel their pain is released..but as we remain here.. our sorrows go on.. This was a heart-moving piece, and I'm very sorry of the loss of your father... I send my love, and hope your heart heals in time. Peace.

    -Timothy

    • twinzy001
      May 28, 2008

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      Timothy
      thank you for your kind words. sorrow spreads just like happiness and Days like today I just need the happiness...Im now orphaned and thought the pain from the loss of my mother would make it easier to deal with the loss of my father...Boy I was wrong...with great friends and family around spreading cheer I will be fine thanks
      Savina


  • Touchof1der silver member
    May 13, 2008

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    OMG Hun... your dad passed away on my birthday!! When you told me, I didn't realize that was the day he passed on. You have penned a beautiful poem in his honor and I know he is by your side even now, spreading his love and watching over you, waiting to guide you when you need it most. This is beautiful.
    ♥ Touchof1der

    • twinzy001
      May 13, 2008
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      thank you so much. Happy Birthday!~Thank you for your words of kindness they always ment so much as they do now!


  • Nicolette gold member
    May 13, 2008
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    My arms around you for your dad, twinz... . I know how this feels. This is lovely, heartfelt poem you've written for him. I'm sure he's walking by your elbow, day and night and that he'll always be there to watch over you.

    I've missed you here on AP, my lovely friend. Hope to see you back. Take care...

    ~ Nicolette

    • twinzy001
      May 13, 2008
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      Thank you nicolette you know how to make the hair stand on my arms by being so supportive. I have missed Ap and I think that I have time in my schedule to come back and read the poems and even post some too. Do you remeber the link you sent me when my mom passed? Ive got a new computer since then and wondered if you still had it.

      • Nicolette gold member
        May 13, 2008

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        Was it a link to a poem..? I can't remember what it was that I sent you, twinz.. I know i wrote a poem for your contest about children and mothers. It was this poem I wrote for your contest, Savina

        http://allpoetry.com/poem/1244557

        • twinzy001
          May 13, 2008
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          thanks alot that means the world and my day. You are an awesome person and poetess and I just need you to know how much I appreciate you being you

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