She rises from the dead
Her soul yurning for somthing red
Yes blood is her crave
She is a vampire
Never to be put to her grave
Feirce lady vampire
Author notes
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A contest entry
- PIF by LadyDementia.
700 points, ended May 13, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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verry strong for simple and short...nice!
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A good dark piece, love vampire tales. Very well penned. Thank you for your entry and good luck

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I can definitely see her as a vampire! And fierce with it!




