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What If

What if she doesnt like my clothes?
What if she doesnt like my shoes?
What if I dont fit in?
What if I make 0 friends?
What if everyone hates me?
What if I die?
What if I dont live a good life?
What if?
What if?
What if?
What if?

Well, what if you dont make your life what you want, and dont stop thinking about if other people will care?
You'll never have the chance--- for anything.

Hmmmmm......

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  • logokitty
    December 22, 2008
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    good poem

    that is a lot what ifs i tried reading it to fast and got confused


  • Unforgiveable
    December 12, 2008
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    I like the message!


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    December 6, 2008

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    Truth

    I like the repetition in this. It is a very true piece. I remember when I used to care what others thought of me. Either you grow out of it or you don't. I did and I'm glad I did because now I enjoy my life. Great job honey. Yours, Gypsy


  • ChemicallyEmilie
    May 14, 2008

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    omg!!!!

    anna this is totally true. i agree with this all the way. i mean it. i love this one!!!!!!! sooooo much! lol.


  • BlueEyedBeauty14
    May 12, 2008
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    niceee

    it's so true to what a lot of people are living these days, you just shed a little more light on it

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