Zeal summit;
dismissed of plummet.
Liberated from cruel ordeal.
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9 words
A contest entry
- Nine Little Words... by Ithica.
525 points, ended May 13, 2008, 25 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Bravo!
I just loved this... Very talented you are... congrats...
~ James ~
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Do you truly believe that we will EVER be liberated from cruel ordeal???
lol!
lovely explanation of freedom my friend
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I love it!!! Just shows once again how much impact a few well chosen words can have when poetic devices are used!!! Thank-you for entering! 
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Thanks for the gold.
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Ohhh very intruging!!! I wanna know what this is related too for you!! hehe
I have my own take on it of course.. lol
Cool nine words bro!
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Has to do with people overcoming. Like getting out of bad relationships. Stuff like that I suppose.
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I thought it was about breaking out of some kind of restraint...
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It is... those things are restraints.
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lol.. I was agreeing with you bro... all kinds of things, including relationships, can be restraints... my last one sure was!! Got rid of him
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sorry things look blurry right now. Headache. blah.
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Well I was a bit vague!
Aww
Get some rest...
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