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Wish You were Here

Lost in the fear
Trembling
Courage sucked from my body
Held on to long
But not long enough
I let you go
I watched you fade into nothingness
My life died
My soul ran scarred
How could I be so selfish to let you go
I wish I hadn't
I want to do it all again
I could do it differently
Nothing would change
We would be happy now
But no, it wasnt meant to be
Now I look at your headstone and cry
Wishing you were here to help me through
This hurt I feel each day is so overwhelming
It is unbearable I cant go on
You're the only one I can talk too
Yet you're the one I cant
I wish you were here
Oh I wish
I'm so dead without you in my life
Rest in peace my love
One day I hope to join you

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  • Shahrazad
    June 23, 2008

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    Awww so sad. It was very very sweet and touching. I can tell the words came from somewhere true within. Thanks for entering the contest


  • Darkest Lover
    May 12, 2008

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    I Love It

    I Love It
    I Like This Write Alot
    So Many Lostness In It
    So Much Pain And Despair
    I Love It

    Thanks For Entering
    And Good Luck


  • StarOfDreams23
    May 12, 2008
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    intresting

    I LOVE IT!!!! WHOO! GREAT! =]