"Desired"
Nine times a day
Only in our dreams...
Rudolf
A contest entry
- Nine Little Words... by Ithica.
525 points, ended May 13, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nine times a day! Ha, I was just going with the theme of all others' replies ; in the early stages of a relationship, I think nine times would be quite manageable
Congrats on the trophy, and thanks for the chuckle
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Hysterical!!!
Your muse really has the gift of the golden pen!!!
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lol...a man's dream I think...good one! ***Pam***
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Good one Rudolf
Good luck in the contest - Bless God - Joe - (Dobar Dan) - ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------hagd - ehhh - jamiedoring - dream on - ha ha -
NINE times a day!! Good Lord!!!!
Rudolf, Rudolf, Rudolf.....
What have you and Ruth-Ann been up to? lol
when the heck do you even find time to write poetry? Jeeze!
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Juicy little nine words here! Well done as always
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Yes,only in our dreams here Rudolf! Amazing what you can do with nine words! GOOD JOB AGAIN!
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Though mighty master of your dreams
Real life not found upon moonbeams
As you slumber and love all night
Nine time you may find pure delight
Then dawn breaks and you face the day
Back to reality and once a day.
Your poem was so cute. I guess being a newlywed had something to do with this. You must still be in your honeymoon stage.
Wonderful poem
Sandy
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Aren't we "hot all to trot" when we are the masters of our own dream universe...??? hehe!!! Sometimes we really do need to float our own boat!!! Good job! Thank-you for entering!
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