When i'm at war
your away.
when you're at war
you're with her.
And as i sit in this heaven,
wishing it were hell,
besides i scream,
knowing not who deserves who.
i haven't been as honest as possible,
but neither have you.
You haven't wished me love,
but neither would i.
So, in my personal hell,
i break the worlds frozen grace;
goodbye, good ridance.
it's like a soldier from a distance place,
the way i'm trying to explain this.
But if you could just listen--
That's all i ask.
A contest entry
- The Battle- Poem off by princess hope.
450 points, ended May 17, 2008, 7 entries
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can anybody relate?
Comments
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And as i sit in this heaven,
wishing it were hell,
besides i scream,
knowing not who deserves who.
Beautiful Illustration in these word's just Beautiful
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I could take a guess and say that this is a reply to.. Why is her name so long?.. am just guessing thou, so if you could please write in your author notes who you are replying to!, Thank you , and best of luck =)
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And as i sit in this heaven,
wishing it were hell,
besides i scream,
knowing not who deserves who.
simply put i love this stanza
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