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Love

How can a four letter word mean so much?
It strikes fear in our hearts yet its everything we want.
We seek it and fear it and the same time.
Just tell me one thing,
How can a four letter word mean so much?

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  • HaydenMessenger silver member
    December 15, 2008
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    I like what's here but it'd be great to hear it expanded. I understand that this is a deliberately short poem but there's potential for much more.

    Thanks for sharing anyway!


  • broken-angel
    May 28, 2008
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    i really liked this...keep it up xxx


  • xXcrimsontearsXx
    May 24, 2008

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    jaded teardrop

    I guess i am part of your group. I love the poem. Ya, why does love exist if it only breaks everyone'a heart?


  • Blessed-Be
    May 16, 2008
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    wow

    this is so true... why did love exist...questions like that come to mind when you read this


  • Re-invention silver member
    May 14, 2008
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    you left me thinking.... love equals to pain, but yet love means life, and life is painful... love is meant to be painful so we can learn our ways.. but today love is considered a four letter word only and the real significance of love is gone... you have painted muhc with simple lines, which I practically wanted to do for long... great one hun!


  • xDisasterous Angelx
    May 13, 2008

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    hey silly...i really like this poem...i think everyone feels this way...and i dont kno why love means so much i dont think anyone does...keep up the good work...

    -much love
    amanda


  • JakOb-Black
    May 12, 2008
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    i have no clue

    if someone u know can explane it to u... then u explane it to me... will ya?


    • Sir Squigglim
      May 15, 2008
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      agreed.... love has no explination~ its a myth, well, maybe you dont want to hear that~ so never mind

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