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My Champion

Now all ye blind, rejoice with me
For there shines a Light from Galilee

Sickness wrought and death be stirred
Sin be cast and glory blurred
Where pain is life and death preferred
Out stepped a King who spoke a Word

All deaf forbidden holy sound
Incline thine ear to the Lord's renown

Pride and envy poisoned mind
Soul enslaved and heart confined
Mammon worship held enshrined
Upon His cross by these entwined

O night of nights, where it all begun
Sweat from his brow as blood would run
Surrounded by three consoled by none
Vexed in soul and a cup to shun
"Not My will but Thine be done"

Wayward hearts, Peace! Be still!
Here comes thy Champion to Calvary's hill

Holy of Holies, brought low to shame
Marked a liar by falsehood claim
But there atop my sin became
The Lamb of God for thee was slain

A rich man's tomb and stone be given
Bathed in spice and wrapped in linen
Glory reigned and hell was driven
My burdens broken, sins forgiven
Run and tell that He is risen

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  • loveisfreedom
    November 19, 2008
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    one word

    beautifule


  • lyrical-rebel
    November 17, 2008

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    This is such a beautiful poem!!! To reflect His glory with mere words would be very hard to do but you have come very close indeed!
    I loved everything about it...!
    To praise the one who has given you this talent, with your talent is just the most wonderful thing one can do... thanks for sharing!
    Love.. LR!


  • Justified Inc.
    November 16, 2008

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    Amen

    Well thought out, clear and concise. Well written and inspirational, a joy to read.
    I especially love the last line! Amen.
    castaway


  • Andypants
    November 15, 2008
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    That was beautiful, an inspiration.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    Mercy rings out as our Savior was crucified. A Triumphant moment as He rose from the dead....This is a beauty of a poem, J...Glad I read!


  • lindaburns gold member
    November 5, 2008

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    Please read the rules.

    Dude! or Dudette!, This contest is exclusively for poems that have not won a trophy. You have both bronze and honorable. Please. Let’s give some other poet a chance.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 24, 2008

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    New species
    wow that would be reaching a bit!
    atleast not in this lifetime but to aspire to,
    this is wonderfully written with a great and a extraordinary message of forgiveness.
    Our Lord and Savior, for me well there is nothing that I love more and you have written this with love and grace.
    beautiful
    thank you for your entry
    God bless you...


  • whits end silver member
    October 5, 2008
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    Holy Wow!

    This is amazing! The words you use are so intense and intelligent. What a work of art!


  • Stars of Hope
    June 1, 2008

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    Love the flow and the rhyme to it. It is such a great story. One that we tell over and over again and never tire of. Great Job! Good Luck!

    Luv ya oodles!
    Courtney


  • Oleander
    May 30, 2008
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    This is very well-written. Thanks for entering this contest.

    Peace

    SweetJane


  • Patpowers silver member
    May 14, 2008
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    God Bless You for writing this! Nice inspiring piece of poetry. THANKS AGAIN!!


  • SaMmYBabY
    May 14, 2008
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    I like it you can tell it came straight from the heart! Great write!!


  • movedon
    May 13, 2008

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    AMEN! "Go and tell the world" Matthew something..lol
    This poem is beautifully penned and you really put a lot of emotions in to this piece. It's heartfelt and I really enjoyed reading it. You should be very proud of this!

    In Christ,
    Mylee

    • deepheart
      May 13, 2008
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      I am very proud of it....thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.


  • Angelflower
    May 12, 2008

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    This was so beautifully written! I really loved this!!
    You write straight from the heart and here you can really tell!
    Great write hun..

    Angel

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