Impatiently waiting for the day
The one special day she has set aside
A day in which she leaves this earth
Many days took to planning
Planning the most perfect death of all
One where no one knows anything was wrong
She takes care of everything
Throwing out most of her clothes
Giving away things they won't need
Paying up all the bills a month ahead
Tending to things they won't think about
Writing letters so no ones left out
And when the day has come
They find her in her bed as if she is still sleeping
No wound to be found no reason to be dead
They find no pills in her body
They find no slit wrists
They find no gun shot to the head
She will have them stumped
Wondering if it was just nature
But never knowing the truth
And now as it's time for that day
She kisses all goodnite
Lays down and departs this life
In a list
A contest entry
- Suicide Solution by Blood Magick.
540 points, ended July 26, 2008, 79 entries
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Comments
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I REALLY like this poem. It's very nice a subtle. I don't know where the suicide is, but I feel like it was there. And that's awsome, when you don't KNOW but you FEEL instead. great job, and good luck in the contest =]
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Mmmmm.... yes this really draws the reader in and keeps one wondering even after it is done. I will know... but not how... interesting and makes one think for sure. Good luck.
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Ok how did she pull that off? What a read!! This is great!! I love it, in an odd sort of way.
Best of luck in this contest!!
and love
Nyetta
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