Love
Strength
Devotion
Happiness
Lust
Cheating
Betrail
Sadness
Hate
Author notes
Wow love to hate in nine words and I looked this up and down I think it is perfect I spent about 17 mins on nine words wow I realy hope you like this and a question for you were it says strength and devotion would you rather it be him her
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- Nine Little Words... by Ithica.
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I was really impressed by the idea behind this, if I may with regards to your Author Note(s) question,Yes, I believe if you personalized this with something akin to His/Hers somewhere in-between it would bring a sense of empathy to the reader. Still, like I said as it stand very intriguing...peace
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Nine awesome words... and all a bit disconnected... Is that what you were going for... that sense of disconnection? You'll need more than this list to do even that!!! Thank-you for entering!!!
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