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I don't want to be sober

"Darling, This is your shelter
  this is your home now.
Accept the facts."

What they didn't say,
  is what they really wanted to.
It's alright though, because I understood
  the subliminal content.

"This time, you won't get better,
  It's not that easy.
This will all end with the barrel of a gun"

But, Baby, I'm too arrogant to die
  and this lipstick is still fresh,
So lets step away for a moment and watch the stars
  pretend we know what they mean.

I'm just a little tipsy,
  just a little morose-
but that's okay tonight.

Tonight, the liquor is strong
  and the flowers so lovely,
everything is alright
  in my world at least.

If I die tonight,
  I'll have your complacent attitude to remember.


Author notes

Danneh

I'm dying of love, it's okay

Both words and the slight theme of Drug rehab

Be harsh, be specific.

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  • Xombii
    May 12, 2008

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    I really like this.
    Though the words were a bit forced at certain times,
    it worked well with the drunken feel of this poem.
    I enjoyed it.
    Thank you for entering and following the rules.