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Was it really worth it?

You have walked these cold streets
With an even colder heart,
Bitter from years past.
The hatred never lets go.

You have lived your troubled life
With an even troubled mind,
Corrupt from situations past.
The insanity never lets go.

You have tried to end this fatal life
With an even more fatal solution,
Built from experiments past.
The suicide never lets go.

You have waited for the sad end
With an even more sad mind,
Depressed from worries past.
The worry never lets go.

You get scared of the sad end
With an even more sad heart,
Sad from what you have done.
Death never lets go.

Was it really worth it?

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There is no reason to kill yourself. Ever. Live on.. you may never know the next time you try to commit suicide may be your last chance, and you won't want to go....

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  • crimson-river
    May 16, 2008

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    dark

    very meaningful to me...
    all these dark feelings that never let go...
    about how much you want to let go...


    • Binary
      May 19, 2008
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      Thank you for your comment. I am glad you can relate ^^.