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Music Box


Pirouette
framed in petite flowers
Reflection
of painted smile
Twin images dance
at each turn of the dial

Squelched in the close
melodic memories lie in repose

Author notes

Prompt is: "looking beyond into the dream of reality"

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  • Grey Mouser
    May 15, 2008

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    Nicely written, good imagery flowing with the music that transports the mind. Thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser