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Tears Dripping Into You

Grinding ashes into dust

Gritting teeth


Whispers becoming




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  • Jake Wesley
    September 5, 2008
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    very deep


  • XXCrimsonRaineXX
    May 13, 2008

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    I do like it. I like the simplicity and the way it leaves the reader wondering because there's so many ways it can be interpreted. Excellent write.

    XXCrimsonRaineXX


  • Ithica silver member
    May 12, 2008

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    This one has me pondering a bit...? Not a bad thing! Many ideas abound...and I can see the effort! Thank-you for entering!


  • Perception
    May 12, 2008

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    Very interestingly done... I like the falling of the word down the page... I would have liked it if there were more words under "faded" So your eyes were drawn to them.. But, oh well -- this is wonderful anyways