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everyday

everyday I saw you i wanted to cry
everyday I didn't see you i wanted to die
the pain for you was great
and the value was high
the value is love
something i have never experenced before
not in this sence of life
but the the odds are to great
of you saying no
for you huged him
and loved him
and hardly even say hi me
we used t be great friends
then you met him
now he's here with me
with his blood on my hands
ill be wanting to die everyday now
just for you

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  • Jesabell
    May 19, 2008

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    Oh my GOD!

    I loved it!! It's awesome. Well written, with some minor spelling errors, but the meaning was quite amazing.