Fate lies within our
grasp
always out of
reach
In a list
A contest entry
- Nine Little Words... by Ithica.
525 points, ended May 13, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Sigh... so true for me! Not that I believe in fate as such.. but the life wanted is out of reach!
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I believe everything happens for a reason, but most times we assume what that reason is and are generally wrong. This keeps what we really need out of reach.
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I have to agree with Tender Wolf on this one... I too think we stop short of reaching far enough! Great job! Thank-you for entering!
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Thank you so much. We can achieve so much with our lives but usually stop reaching at some point
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fate lies within our reach but we just dont reach far enough...i love the picture and the flow of your words...thank you kindly!
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Thank you so much for all your wonderful comments. I am so grateful you like my work
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oooooo.... Very nicely done... I like how you play the contrast of "grasp" and "out of reach"...
Wonderfully done... This is just an amazing... Nine words
Best of luck in your contest
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. Since you are a dreamer and Whitney fan lol my friends daughter just drew a pic for dreamer, i posted it with the story http://allpoetry.com/poem/4215963
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awhole lotta emotion in "9 lil words"
good job and good luck
christina
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Thank you so much
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ur welcome
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VERY GOOD!
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Thank you so much
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