I HAVE WONDERED
As I lie here next to you
with my heart so full of love
that it is nearly breaking.
I try to put my thoughts,
my emotions, into words
that I think you would understand.
Often in the past, I begin softly. I would simply wonder
at how it would be to hold you.
To feel the touch of your silken skin next to mine.
To feel the touch of your soft gentle lips.
To feel our passion igniting
then taking on a life of its own
until finally sated
we fall into a deep exhausted sleep
still locked in each other’s warm embrace.
In the past, I whisper in awe,
I would often wonder these things
Now however I know.
A contest entry
- Born in another life! (weird) by Angelflower.
1170 points, ended May 21, 11 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Pretty
Very pretty poem here. We all wonder what it's like to be in love. Fortunately, I don't have to wonder anymore either because I have found the love of my life. Great work.
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This was a wonderful poem..
Very sweet and the imagery was loving..
Thank you so much for sharing.
Best of luck..
Angel
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Beautifully written and good luck
to you with this one in the contest!
Thanks a lot for sharing it here!
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Jeremy 0826's comments on my poem I have wondered
I really appreciate the good luck in the contest! And the wonderful words on my poem. I appreciate you reading and commenting. Thanks for taking the time out of I am sure a busy day to do this.
Hugs,
trekkergirl
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sometimes the past will not un blindfold us but you being born in to another life i guess you did a great piece for the contest good luck to you in the contest
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D Saul So Sexy comment on I have wondered
I appreciate your comment on my poem. I like it too.
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Lovingly Erotic
Very nice flow and full of rich emotions... very sensual and well done...
Ken
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KayJay46 reply on I HAVE WONDERED
Thank you for your wonderful comments on my poem. I appreciate them very much.
trekkergirl
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very passionate..
ummm forgot "to" in your first line..i do this..spellcheck and such..hehe..please only take it as intended..in friendship and not to demean..i realize you are published..me too..please help me out also..i need all the help i can get..hehe..this write is wonderful..can picture this happening..very vivid imagery...thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest..blessings..namaste..
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vici377's comment on my poem I HAVE WONDERED
Thank you for noticing that I had left out the word "to" in the first line. that has been fixed. And thanks for the kind words on the poem itself.
trekkergirl
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