Demon's dwell protecting their word,
playgrounds of spells; unclean deeds.
Evil reeks its stench through out
the air;
as ominous darkness beckons the dead,
abomination's gather, feasting upon naive souls.
Author notes
Prompt:Haunted_by_BloodRosesCollection
30 words ~ I'm not warped I just love horror movies
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF by LadyDementia.
700 points, ended May 13, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent
Wow, such a dark and perfect take on the image. So very well expressed. Congrats on the honorable mention.
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Some wicked descriptions leading to fab imagery here. A great piece, very well penned. Thank you for your entry and good luck
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Ohh creepy ending! "feasting upon naive souls".. a seeping darkness in this! Great write!
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Awesome take on the pic--well done and Best of luck in the contest!!
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very nice done! Really dark! "as ominous darkness beckons the dead, abomination's gather, feasting upon naive souls" great line, fits the pic perfectly! Good luck in the contest
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Nice and dark - and chilling! - and goes well with the picture!
Well done with that prompt!!
best wishes in the contest.
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oooooooo this is truly dark. Necrophilia has always given me shivers, as there really are people who do this. Internal rhyme , used in just the right places, gives this an evil tone. Great idea to highlight those three words.I never watch horror movies. They scare me too much! I think I'll stick to "Chick flicks!" Best wishes.
Shana
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