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[ I sit here crying for you ]

I sit here crying for you
You told me your love is true
But now I know it was all a lie
You leave me here to cry
now I see love in a diffrent view

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Well I am going to try to comment them all so that should be good=D

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  • ecrivain01
    May 12, 2008

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    This is not a limerick ...

    as I pointed out before. Read the definition of a limerick and then write one that actually fits the form.